Stone wall standing between the next door neighbor and our home, built to the maximum height of six feet tall. The neighbor originated the idea as I remember. The new neighbor took a different turn. Neither the branches of my trees nor leaves of my plants are welcome to extend past the wall. I trimmed the orange tree to a half dome shape and make my plants behave.
Stone wall separates
Faces, communications
Turn to lone castles
The neighbor on the other side greets me in the morning, praises the plants and flowers in my garden. This is one of the two neighbors of twenty-five years. Other homes have a great turn over. New people seem to have stone faces. I try to reach out, yet favors didn’t receive any return.
Mystery of faces
Impenetrable stone
Some turns we have made
Retrieve to cautious islands
Never give, never receive
We had a neighborhood watch. A neighbor rang the doorbell when our garage door was still open at midnight. Where did the friendly neighbors go? Why have the neighborhood parties slipped away? I wonder!
Welcome, Miriam! I love your Haibun. The symbolism of a stone wall really captures the philosophy of Americans today. They all wall themselves off from reality. Excellent thoughts and your poetry is spot on! Glad you’re here! ❤
Thank you, Colleen for your encouragement. This is sort of my Haibun. I might have written something like that before I read your explanation of Haibun which is educational. Now I fall in love with Haibun. I saw other blog posts of your challenge before, I didn’t jump in until yesterday. I love it.
This is my third year in the poetry class. There is this Osher Lifelong Learning Institute (OLLI) held in 26 States the State universities for the semi-retired and retired folks. I take poetry, choral and watercolor classes. It suit me because I’m a professional learner. 🙂 🙂
Colleen, I agree with you. After getting so many degrees – 3 masters and 1 doctorate, I don’t need any more degrees, so I just take classes at Junior college or OLLI. It’s fun without pressure! ♥*♥*♥
The stone wall is so symbolic of this trend where some people are afraid to connect with others in their neighbourhood and your haibun expresses this beautifully ☺💖 xxx
Thank you so much, Xenia. One funny story was that two young adults met online and dated with each other. They found out that they were neighbors in the same apartment!
Two beautiful poems, Miriam. Life has changed so much and there is little neighbourliness left in this world. We have lived in our house for over 12 years and I hardly know the neighbours on either side. I too tried but my friendliness was not returned.
How sad it is these days! When I don’t trim my trees for a while, y neighbor trims it and throw it back to my yard. It’s so hateful. They are strange people!
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Welcome, Miriam! I love your Haibun. The symbolism of a stone wall really captures the philosophy of Americans today. They all wall themselves off from reality. Excellent thoughts and your poetry is spot on! Glad you’re here! ❤
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Thank you, Colleen for your encouragement. This is sort of my Haibun. I might have written something like that before I read your explanation of Haibun which is educational. Now I fall in love with Haibun. I saw other blog posts of your challenge before, I didn’t jump in until yesterday. I love it.
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Yea! I’m so glad you did. We are all learning to write poetry together so stop by and join in whenever you want. Hugs. ❤
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This is my third year in the poetry class. There is this Osher Lifelong Learning Institute (OLLI) held in 26 States the State universities for the semi-retired and retired folks. I take poetry, choral and watercolor classes. It suit me because I’m a professional learner. 🙂 🙂
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I love it. I’ve always said, if I could go to college all the time I would love it. Good your you, Miriam. ❤️
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Colleen, I agree with you. After getting so many degrees – 3 masters and 1 doctorate, I don’t need any more degrees, so I just take classes at Junior college or OLLI. It’s fun without pressure! ♥*♥*♥
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Exactly. I love it! ❤
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Thank you, Colleen!! *¨*•♥•*¨*
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The stone wall is so symbolic of this trend where some people are afraid to connect with others in their neighbourhood and your haibun expresses this beautifully ☺💖 xxx
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Thank you so much, Xenia. One funny story was that two young adults met online and dated with each other. They found out that they were neighbors in the same apartment!
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Haha, that kind of says it all! 😄💖 xxx
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I know! I wonder if some of my new neighbors used to live in apartments!!!!
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😅🙋💜 xxx
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*°• ♥ •°* xoxo
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Two beautiful poems, Miriam. Life has changed so much and there is little neighbourliness left in this world. We have lived in our house for over 12 years and I hardly know the neighbours on either side. I too tried but my friendliness was not returned.
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How sad it is these days! When I don’t trim my trees for a while, y neighbor trims it and throw it back to my yard. It’s so hateful. They are strange people!
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Our neighbours did that exact same thing. Very mean, I agree.
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Sorry, Robbie, for the delayed response, your comment has been in the spam.
Yes, I don’t understand what people have become of these days!
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I loved both of these-but the second especially. Good job.
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Thank you, Michele! I love my poetry class and admire the class members who has written poetry for so many years.
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