Thursday photo prompt – Sight #writephoto
Sue’s Thursday Photo Prompt – Sight #writephoto
Trapped in the ruin
Disappear, exhaustion persisted
Survival instinct
Swollen, torn feet pressed on, till
Sight of hope through eye of stone
~
The Showers of Blessings
Giving and Receiving Blessings
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Thank you, Sue!
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Nice last line using “sight” and “eye”.
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Thank you so much for “seeing” the words. I appreciate it.
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Thank you, Sue!
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Excellent! 🙂
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Thank you, Bette!
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Wow amazing photo
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Thank you so much!
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Such an unusual photo and perspective!
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That photo is from the prompt. I had an option of using my own photo, but I thought that photo is intriguing for a poem. Thank you for you comment, Teresa. I’m working on the submissions to an anthology, so take some time out of blogging!
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Still, very intriguing!
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Thank you, Teresa!!
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I like the expression, ‘eye of stone’. That the stones have eyes – I had not though before – and now it shall not leave my mind, I believe 🙂 xx
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Oh, thank you, I didn’t think of it until started writing and looked at the photo, then came up with that expression of how a trapped person can get out…. can write a novel of it, hehe….*¨*•♥•*¨*
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Perfection! 😀
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Thank you so much!
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A whole story in one tanka 🙂
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Thank you, Sue. I like Tanka because it’s just right to tell a short story!
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Yes, it is a useful form.
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Yes, it is!
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This is lovely, Miriam. Such a great photo from Sue this week.
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Yes, allow so much imagination!!
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Great photos and words that complement it. 👍☺💕
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Thank you so much!!
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