Flash Fiction Challenge – Rock Star
August 1, 2019, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about a rock star. You can feature a central character or write about the feeling like a rock star. Go where the prompt leads!
Rock Star
John Livingston stood in the center stage. It was their first concert on the road.
Ringo started the percussion. John, Paul and George plucked the guitars for three beats. They sang on the fourth beat.
“Hey Jude…, don’t make it bad…”
The fans screamed. The girls reached out their hands.
“Take a sad song and make it bet…ter…”
The screaming got louder.
“…Na-na-na na… hey Jude.”
The four bowed to reach to their fans. One girl pulled John so hard, he fell off the stage and hit his head.
“Ouch!”
“John, wake up. You’re late to your camping trip.”
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Carrot Ranch Flash Fiction – Rock Star
Excellent read, I just passed this onto a friend who was doing some research on that. And he actually bought me lunch since I found it for him smile Therefore let me rephrase that: Thank you for lunch!
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Nice reference to the biggest rock stars of all time!
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Thank you, I was looking for a song easier to refer to, this one is good from the beginning!
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Now that’s a great dream:)
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It was, Denise. I had a small audience growing up singing but it wasn’t rock music!
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Ha ha ha. Let’s just hope his dream can become reality one day.
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Thank you, I surely hope so.
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Now I have that song stuck in my head! I like it though. Great use of lyrics to bring your flash to life.
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Thank you, Charli. I sang that song over and over in my head also.
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In your dreams, John Livingston. Don’t we all wish to be a rock star at some time? Great response, Miriam.
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Haha, Norah, thank you. I sang that song again and again after I wrote that flash.
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Sometimes they torment us, don’t they, Miriam? They just won’t leave us alone.
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I know, Norah. It’s fading now, finally.
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I won’t remind you of it then, Hey Miriam. 🙂
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Haha, thank you for the reminder. It’s a good song. I like the line of “take a sad song and make it better.” 🙂
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I agree. That’s what we all need to do, isn’t it?
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Yes, I remember one Christian song with one line goes like, (whatever confusion I have) “… He made something beautiful of my life.”
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What an uplifting thought to carry.
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Exactly!! 🙂
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Some dream! ⭐
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Thank you, Chelsea! 🙂
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A nice twist 💜
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Thank you very much, Willow. ❤
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A lovely fantasy or dream, Miriam.
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Haha, thank you, Robbie! Paul McCartney is a talented music and song lyrics writer.
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