“Fiction In A Flash Challenge” Week #11 – Destination
I am so happy to participate in the “Fiction in a Flash Challenge” by Suzanne Burke. This is her Week #11. Each week she’ll be featuring an image and inviting you to write a Flash Fiction or Non-Fiction piece inspired by that image in any format and genre of your choosing. Maximum word count: 750 words. Please click the link at the end of the post if you’re interested.
Destination
“What do you think about St. Andrews Church?” Joshua and Melissa were at the café reviewed their notes. He had a Mocha Cookie Crumble Frappuccino and Melissa had a Cinnamon Dolce Latte.
“I like the layout of the sanctuary. The stage is five steps higher than the audience, but it’s not too far from the first pew. I like the alter and the apse behind it.” Melissa took a sip of her latte, recalled the details of the church layout.
“The location is just right with the access to major freeways.”
“We need to write different directions to get there because we have families and friends from all over the state. And we also need the direction to get to our homes from the airport.”
“Yes, I’ll write the directions. Have agreed that you’ll create the website? You’re the techie.”
“No problem. I picked the template of the website and the color scheme already.” Melissa took another sip of the latte.
“I trust you on that. I’ll admire it when it’s done.”
“I need you to help in making a list of the hotels in town with different price ranges, a list of the restaurants, some entertainments, and places to visit while they’re in town.”
“That part is simple. I’ll have them in just a few clicks. Some tourist sites have plenty of recommendations.” Joshua entered a few notes on his phone.
“I created a spreadsheet of the timeline. Once we decide on the church and reception locations, I’ll plug in the details. We have visited several churches. What other ones do we consider?”
“What do you think about the Lutheran Church?”
“I liked it, but the sanctuary has dark walls on all sides. The church doesn’t have the best lighting for photography.”
“You’re a better one to have any say on that from a photographer point of view. What other churches do we want to consider?”
“The Presbyterian Church has a modern look.”
“Yes, there are plenty of parking spaces, and the structure is on the same level as the church.”
“But it’s too far from the Reception Hall at the Gulf Course. I’m afraid some people may get lost. I know we can give the direction from the church to the Reception Hall.”
“Your concern is valid. Let’s keep talking.”
“I can’t believe it’s been seven years since we met.”
“Time flies when you have fun as people say. I’m so happy that we have fun together.”
“You were so cute when we first met.” Sparks filled Melissa’s eyes.
“How so? What did I do?”
“Well, that’s it. You did nothing. You just stared at me for the longest time until I said ‘hi’ and you startled.”
“I did? I don’t remember that.”
“You offered to buy me a drink. I said ‘I don’t drink’.”
“Now I remember. Then I said I’d buy you anything to drink.”
“It was our first day there at the resort on the mountain. I arrived in the morning and you got there in the afternoon.”
“Yes, I took the gondola lift to get up there.”
“So did I! I wanted to have time to look around before the hiking trip the next day.”
“How did you like the view going up?”
“The aerial view of the water fall from the gondola took my breath away. It was like magic.”
“It was impressive and exhilarating. I had seen nothing like that. It’s not the same as seeing it from the airplane. It’s seeing it in the air yet, it’s close enough to see the rushing bubbles.”
“I’m writing our story to post on the wedding website… That’s it! I want a destination wedding.” Melissa almost jumped up.
“At the resort on the mountain top?”
“Yeah, I want people to experience the magic.”
“I know, people always want to know how and where the couple met.”
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“Fiction In A Flash Challenge” Week #11 – Destination
Thank you reading! Please let me know what you think!
Aww, how sweet! Also probably took place before Covid.
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Yes, it did. A couple years ago. A friend’s daughter did it.
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I was wondering where you were going to take this one Miriam. Very nice little twist. I have been to one Destination Wedding in Vegas. It was my brother so even though it was the summer, we had a good time.
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Yeah, Clara, I started the story, then made a turn, but didn’t quite know how to wrap it up. I suddenly remembered a few stories. One destination wedding had the chef carrying the wedding cake to go up to the ski resort on open lift. As he hopped off the lift, the cake fell. Ouch! I chose gondola instead of open lift!
Thank you for reading, Carla!
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Great story, Miriam. A destination wedding at a mountain resort sounds wonderful, especially if it’s the place they met. My husband and I would have had to get married in an office building. Lol. Wonderful take on the prompt, my friend. ❤
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Haha, Diana, two families’ kids had destination weddings.
Those weddings usually have limited capacity of guests.
My husband and I would have had ours in someone’s backyard then, because we met at a party. 😂
Thank you for your comment.💖
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Delightful! ❤
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Thank you for reading and comment, Bette! ❤
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I was wondering what ending the story was building to. It was a surprise!
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Thank you, Liz! It’s the fun of writing flash fiction. I wasn’t sure how it would end wither. I took a break and come back to finish!
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It’s always so much fun when that happens!
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I like writing flash fiction because I only need to write one scene!
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I enjoyed this romantic take on my prompt, Miriam. Thanks so much for joining in again. I’ll be featuring your contribution in Part 6) of the entries on Saturday, August 8th. I hope you find more of my prompts inspire you. Thanks again. ❤
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Thank you, Soooz! I had fun writing this prompt. Thanks for featuring it. I’ll try my best in the future prompts. ❤
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Awesome, Miriam. Let’s hope my images continue to inspire you.
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Thank you, Soooz. It has other factors too, so don’t worry!
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I love the idea of a wedding on a mountain top! There was s newscast last week where a young couple flew in by helicopter and were married with the pilot officiating and their family watching via IPad- so romantic ❤
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Oh, Jacquie, thank you for sharing that newscast with me. I love that idea also. I think wedding should be special for the couple and not necessarily inviting many family friends who may not know the couple. ❤
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That’s a cute story Miriam, I could relate to it. The picture presents perfect setting for a memorable wedding.
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Yes, Balroop, I think it’s a romantic and memorable wedding. I’m glad you liked it.
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What a sweet story, Miriam! That was a great use of the prompt!
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Thank you, Jan! It turned out nice as I figured out how it would end when writing it.
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What a fun planning event. Everyone helping. I love it.
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Thank you, Jacqui! I heard of events like this. The chef carried the wedding cake to go up on a open chair lift instead of gondola and the cake fell as he got off the lift!!
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This piece made me smile. What a fun way to do a wedding. I would love it.
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Thank you, Denise! My friend’s son had a destination wedding on top of the mountain. They could only accommodated a small number of guests to go up on the chair lifts. She kept apologizing for not inviting us.
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Aww, that’s so sweet, Miriam. I wondered how you were going to work the photo into the story and it was perfect.
Very well done!
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Thank you, Mae! I had several scenarios in mind and this one survived!
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It sounds wonderful, Miriam. A destination wedding, I like that.
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I heard of many stories about destination weddings, Robbie. I was going to write about that but I didn’t want to write a disaster wedding.
Some went up the skiing resort on open chair lifts and all kinds of funny things happened when they got off the chair. The chairs don’t stop so people have to get ready to step off the chairs when the chairs keep the momentum of circling back down the mountain.
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I’m helping my daughter plan her wedding right now. We won’t be having it at the top of a stunning waterfall, but I still hope it’s magical for her. Love your take on this prompt.
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Your daughter’s wedding will be magical, Staci! It’s a dream come true.
My daughter is 1,000 miles away. Nine years ago, I gave her my planning sheet and two wedding planners and she did the planning by herself. I flew and went with her on the gown fitting. The girls in my family of many generations have good organization skills. I can even see it in my almost three years old granddaughter. It feels funny and we laugh at it.
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We’re planners, too. I’m 1,000 miles from my son right now. But he’s not planning a wedding. And I suspect he won’t need Mom as much as my daughter does when his time comes.
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I’m glad your daughter needs your help with her planning, Staci! It’s a wonderful time for mother-daughter bonding.
Since the bride’s family pays the most of the wedding cost, it would be okay for your son’s fiancé does most of the planning when time comes.
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Lovely piece, Miriam. I think this couple with have a long and happy life together. Take care! ❤
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They seem to get along well. I wish them Happily Ever After. ❤ Thank you, Jill.
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I liked this, Miriam. Initially they’ve lost sight of what really matters; each other and their love for one another. Like the waterfall they are rushing on. It’s the material man-made constructions versus nature. But life/nature isn’t like that; there’s no certainty in life, however much one tries to pin it down ( as we are finding out at this strange time). I felt the wedding will be a celebration of past, present and future – as it should be. It’s never just about the day..
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Yes, Judith, sometimes life seems to be caught in the middle or tangled up with unimportant matters. You’re right, the wedding day may mark the milestone of the relationship but shouldn’t be a time of stress. Thank you for your comment.
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Nice writing Miriam. I hope that you and your family are all well. Sending love from here. xx
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Thank you for your comment, Miriam! I appreciate your love and well wishes. We’re doing well. I’m preparing to fly and visit my daughter and granddaughters in two weeks. We’re trying to be cautious and self quarantine before my arrival. I look very much forward to meeting my new granddaughter. ❤
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Oh, how wonderful Miriam. I hope you enjoy every moment. ❤️
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Thank you, Miriam. I’m so excited. ❤
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Nice read! Glad you shared. How are you keeping? 🙂
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I’m doing fine. I haven’t gone anywhere for 5 months. But I planned a trip to visit my new granddaughter in 16 days. She’ll be five months old. I just missed being there for her birth. 🙂
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Understandably so – with Covid the world is turned upside down!
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